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Discussion in 'Storytelling/Creepypasta' started by Balance the YingYang, Sep 8, 2016.

  1. Balance the YingYang

    Balance the YingYang Weaver of Destiny =MGN= Trusted Officer Proud Founder of PSD Active Member

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    Let's see.. I'm going to turn a meme into a story :p
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    It's school day. I'm so happy this was the last year I get to spend at this hell. The first day was usual. I met up with my best friends,Amy and Maddison. We were planning where to sit down together when
    "Class,we have a new student"
    I looked to the front of the class. A girl with really long black hair,a and she worn a black dress. It's almost as if she was at a funeral
    She enthusiastically spoke "Hi,i am Alice. I am from Lucent High. I am so excited to learn with you guys." I was surprised with her enthusiastic voice. When she searched for a seat, I asked Maddison to sit with Amy instead.
    "Here you can totally sit beside me". As she sat down,i notice there were something red under her eyes. I didn't thought of it much though."So where do you live?" She didn't answered me because she was busy with her books. When she finally pucks up her English book." What?" I would like to know where you live. Then we could visit you " oh.. I think you would get lost in the forest trying to find my house." Oh so.... Do you have any phone number?"
    Nope,i don't " I became curious. Her dress looks really beautifully woven as if it were expensive silk. How cant she buy a phone or something like that? Why does she live in a forest. So after school,me,Amy and Maddison followed her home. "Hey Alice,can we follow you to your house? We would like to know where you live"
    "Huh? Sure!"
    So we followed her into a forest.
    But I was certain,since when did this forest existed? I thought it's supposed to be urban areas here.
    As we captured deep and deep into the forest,i checked whether or not Amy and Maddison are there or not and then... "Ok were here!" I stared at the house. It was a beautiful cottage. I'm certain she didn't have WiFi or a hand phone. As she opened the door,i was astonished whats inside. It was like a mansion. She lets us sleep in a bedroom and Amy and Maddison just slept afterwards. But.. at 12:00a.m. I wasn't asleep yet. I'm still playing my video fames when I saw Alice walking through the tiny gap of the door. I silently walk down. What is she doing at this time? As she goes outside, she went to this bush. And push it back. "She never told us around this area when she toured the house" I thought. Then,when I went through the bush. I saw a woman.. maybe around her 30's crying in front of a grave.it was tears of blood. I tried to go back silently but then "I knew your here"
    The woman had the exact voice Alice had only.. in a more cryptic way. "Umm.. are you,Alice's mom? "
    "Mom? I never had a mom. I never had anyone. I am.... Forever alone"
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    Now ok, this freaks me out. Intriguing though. The crying woman is... Alice?
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    ummm okay then
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  4. Balance the YingYang

    Balance the YingYang Weaver of Destiny =MGN= Trusted Officer Proud Founder of PSD Active Member

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    Not my story Alice though :p
    Let's just say, she is a ghost thing that can shapeshift her look height etc. But that's what she really looks like.... Tadaa


    I actually want to make the protagonist the next day somehow wakes up in on a street and lost everyone she cared about.
     
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    :O So Cuul! So creepy! Nice story!
     
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    Balance the YingYang Weaver of Destiny =MGN= Trusted Officer Proud Founder of PSD Active Member

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    Really.. it's normal for me
    The creepiest creepypastas are ritual ones... (Like the three kings)
    I've been watching too much creepypastas at night haven't I....
     
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    Ish don't know about that at all
     
  8. Balance the YingYang

    Balance the YingYang Weaver of Destiny =MGN= Trusted Officer Proud Founder of PSD Active Member

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    Not a lot do :p
    Most people know the "Jeff the killer" or "slender man" but the hidden creepypastas are scarier :p
     
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    I would guess the crying woman was Alice and they spent 20 years sleeping in the house.

    For some reasons I can only find the time at night to read stories. >.>
     
  10. Balance the YingYang

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    I know right...
    :P
    Stories are good at bedtime...
    And creepypastas all the same.
     
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    Spoiler alert. :p

    That's quite interesting. I love stories like these, too.
     
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    when no boys like u ;-;

    *sad violin*
     
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    Ples I just want some pasta v_v
     
  14. Balance the YingYang

    Balance the YingYang Weaver of Destiny =MGN= Trusted Officer Proud Founder of PSD Active Member

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    The illuminati one is a boy one(what? Boys troll and make great main characters.. Girls are simply creepy. (And I'm a girl).
    Male ghosts should be more aggressive
     
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    3spooky5me
     
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    Woah so creepy there!!!
    I agree with Hose